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Writing Groups: Positive Versus Negative Feedback

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If you’ve joined a writing group, chances are that you want ideas on how to make your writing better.

When I first sat down to blog about writing group feedback, I hadn’t thought of it as a controversial area. Yet after my last post, I received a lot of comments from writers concerned that constructive feedback might be taken as “negative” feedback.

My definition of “positive” feedback includes anything that contributes to improving our writing. That includes comments pointing out:

  • where the story goes off-track
  • where the characters might do or say something in a more effective way to advance the story
  • how to improve grammar, spelling, or punctuation.

In short, all ideas and suggestions about making a manuscript stronger or more effective can be considered positive, constructive feedback.

Writing group members most often present these ideas in an honest and respectful way. Yet damaging or even “toxic” feedback sessions do happen. In more than 20 years of writing group participation, it’s happened to me twice. Over the years, I’ve spoken to other writers who’ve had at least one such experience, and a few who have left groups because of it. (For ideas on how to handle it, see “Writing Groups: Handling Negative Feedback.”)

Here are some thoughts about how to promote the positive, based on my experiences:

1) Choose a group with members that mesh well in terms of goals and ability, including writers at a similar writing level or with similar expectations. Some groups start naturally after writing classes, and some start because a particular writer puts out a call to others to join. Many groups will allow prospective members to attend a few meetings to decide. Some request a writing sample and decide without ever meeting the writer in person. Some add members only by invitation. However they start, communication and respect are key features in any group’s success.

2) Give honest and direct critiques that point out where a piece needs work, and make suggestions for improvement. (For ideas about this, see “Writing Groups: Ideas for Feedback.”)

3) Lay the groundwork carefully. Have a group discussion about each writer’s goals, and what each would like to see addressed in critiques. Develop an agreement – even a written agreement – about how critiques should be presented, and go over these ideas with new members as they join the group. If you’re a new member, ask about how critiques are handled in the group so you’re aware of expectations.

Groups with a solid foundation offer a valuable experience for all writer-members. If you’re in a writing group, how did you come to an understanding about critiques within your group? Do you have an informal understanding, or a written set of guidelines? (Please click “Read more” below and leave a comment.)

Honorable Mention – or not?

Entering a writing contest can be rewarding – even when you don’t win.

It feels great to win or place in a writing contest. I’ve even made a little money along the way. Every year I add up the contest entry fees and the winnings, and I’m glad to say that so far I’m receiving back more than I’m spending.

Sometimes my work has received honorable mention, and that feels great – but it’s not placing high enough for publication. For example, I made the honorable mention list in a recent Glimmer Train fiction contest, as you can see on the honorable mention list here. That means I placed in the top five percent of more than 1000 entries. It’s a high-end magazine, and a stiff competition, so it really feels great to get that far.

In the congratulations email, the editor suggests I should mention this placement in my cover letter when I send the story out to other publishers.

Here’s the question: should I mention it in a cover letter, or not? Most publishers don’t want previously published work, but many don’t mention previous contest entries.

What do you think? What do you do about previous contest entries that place, but aren’t published? Have you had experiences with contest placement that helped your poems or stories reach publication? Or has a contest win without publication ever prevented you from submitting that piece to another publisher? (Please click “Read more” to add your comment.)